Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteHi Caleb, this play is really creative I could watch it like 100 more times. Did you think about why the house was moving? I thought it was like a earthquake effect. Also I like how you put your head on the service man. Why was the colourful person kicking a soccer ball at a house?
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb,your slide has cool colours and it is a good first slide. Maybe next time you could improve your graphics so the house doesn't change size so much.
ReplyDeletethank u guys for commenting and giving me advice
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