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Tuesday, April 2, 2019

my play

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  2. Hi Caleb, this play is really creative I could watch it like 100 more times. Did you think about why the house was moving? I thought it was like a earthquake effect. Also I like how you put your head on the service man. Why was the colourful person kicking a soccer ball at a house?

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  3. Hi Caleb,your slide has cool colours and it is a good first slide. Maybe next time you could improve your graphics so the house doesn't change size so much.

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  4. thank u guys for commenting and giving me advice

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