Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, July 24, 2019
What I did in the hoidays
For writing, we had to make a report of what we did in the holidays first we had to fill out the sheet then we had to start the story the teacher took us down to the mat and she said we have to make a good hook.
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Hi Caleb reading your story about the holidays reminded me how much fun we had together, Family time with you is so much fun especially the ice skating. We got a lot of sushi over the holidays, do you like the chicken or Tuna the best?
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