Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
The Huge Lions
For writing and reading, we had to read a story about lions then answer questions and then we got to choose for writing, I did show not tell. I think i have done the best I could do. Do you know anything about Lions?
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Hi Caleb this is a really cool post. Maybe next time you could make a bigger description. And no I know nothing about tigers.
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