Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 31, 2020
Batman vs Superman
For writing, we had had to choose a topic and then to make a plan and then to make a draft, and after that do a rubric and edit and revise. I think I have done really well this was an easy task. Have you ever watched the movie Batman vs Superman?
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Bula Caleb, WOW so much fun words that make we want to shout wow. This writing that you wrote already gave me a picture in my head of superman vs batman and obviously batman would win because he is the best. Oh and maybe next you could read it out to yourself because some of your writing which is AWESOME I can't understand. Anyways nothing else than that your writing was really awesome piece of writing. Oh and maybe next time you could visit my blog at https://wpsfaithm.blogspot.com/. That is all from Faith bye!
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