Friday, August 23, 2019
Big rhinos
For writing, we had to do an information report and I did it on rhinos because there are big and they have horns. I think I've done well.
This is working progress.
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good job Caleb
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ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Tuari.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you added all of the information on big Rhinos.
Did you know I like big Rhinos because I like there horns.
Next time, you could spell Rhinos correctly.
Why did you pick this subject?
Thanks you for the feedback best mate!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Caleb that is really cool thanks for teaching me some facts about Rhinos. I wish we had one as a pet because they look cuddly and then they could help keep our grass at a short length as it seems they are always eating grass.I cant wait to read more once its finished. Just remember to proof read. Well done I also like the pictures.
ReplyDeleteHi unknown thanks for the comment but why would you have a pet rhino cause it would go everywhere and wreck stuff.š
ReplyDeleteHi little fellow, it's Damien your brother.
ReplyDeleteI like the photos that you have put in the slide and the information that you have written. Rhinos look like they are always smiling just like you.Next time you could add like a glossary at the end of the slide and put words like floodplains and some words that no one understands.
Hi unknown this is not finished
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