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What's your opinion, do you like rugby better than soccer.
Tuesday, August 20, 2019
why rugby is better than soccer!!!!!!!!!!
For Literacy, we had to make another Persuasive writing and this time I did it on why rugby is better than soccer. I think I´ve done really well at this Persuasive writing and I hope you like it.
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ReplyDeleteYes you do love rugby so now I see why you have chosen to play rugby over soccer. I like how you said rugby is a shorted game than soccer as in Winter sometimes its chilly in the frosty weather. Whats your favorite position to play?